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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Tiny shell along the colossus where the island wears the storm, from what season are your born, have you now your dream of freedom, or from cushioned waters onto frontline sands, has your tick of time for now been tossed? /font> [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (04-11-2006 07:50 AM).] |
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Musicmaker1969 
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
It is a pretty visual poem. I'm not too sure where you are going, like are you talking about where the shell came from along the shoreline or what? I'm not great at analyzing poems, but enjoying the feeling and visuals. I enjoyed the visuals in this one. Well done. Sheri Adams Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a beautiful ponderful write, Mish |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."from what season, were you born"... This struck me, in addition to the beauty that you consistently bring... The records of creation are written in the rings of trees, and the layers of shell... How rich the heritage that moves out from the circle. Loved this! TD |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"where the island wears the storm" ~ What a poetic way of phrasing it!  Love & Light, Linda  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Say this title five times real fast...how are ya you good looking blond bombshell? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
love shells.... a certain puppy sent me shells and a candle once...  friends and shells...couldn't ask for more. you always make me think Michele.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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