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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2006-04-10 10:36 PM



Be still
within this gentle hour
of reflection
and tears
Be calm
within this hour of uncertainity
light
always
prevails
wisdom
never
far
from sight
love
always
around
the
corner
Be still
within this gentle hour
of confusion
fear
and
optimism
Be calm
Angels
protect
the fragile heart
and
stubborn willed
YES
it's alright
to
finally
surrender
God
is
never
far
from
sight...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2006 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-04-10 10:53 PM


how reassuring this is! I love it!
Musicmaker1969
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2 posted 2006-04-10 10:58 PM


This is very true and written well.  I have trouble reading prose, so it took me a couple of times reading it to catch the drift, but your right on target.  Nice write.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
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Earth Angel
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3 posted 2006-04-12 11:43 AM


A sweet, tender, and hopeful write. You are one who does keeps her eyes open ~ and you DO see.

God bless you!

Angel blessings of love and peace,
Linda
Flowers

miscellanea
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4 posted 2006-04-12 09:21 PM


a very gentle and calming write;  very, very much enjoyed.  One for the library...

miscellanea

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