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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-04-10 09:16 AM


writing a book without words
the first time
all the way through
like reading the bible
at one sitting

the dry run again
while the ground is still wet
from the last one
and the ruts are pools
with out gates for the snakes

I tear the pages of the catalog
making the story longer
with each ommission
sorting the lies from truth
but not the truth from lies

even transparent has some discoloring


______________

daark


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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-04-10 10:20 AM


sounds like my kind of a day~~~


M

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
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2 posted 2006-04-10 02:30 PM


Do you need some rose colored shades today, O' da ark one?  Wordless but not unimaginative, you shoot straight from the hip--and now echo strains antidiluvian?   That would be a first!

  Klassy

(P.S. For one writing a book without words, your vocabulary is awesome!)
  

[This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (04-10-2006 03:11 PM).]

Martie
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3 posted 2006-04-10 02:37 PM


Daark....You made me look up a word...and learn something new today.  Thanks for that!  
Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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4 posted 2006-04-10 03:41 PM


thank  you ladies
for the eyes
and smiles

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
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5 posted 2006-04-10 09:09 PM


This was great! You have a way with words!!!!!!!!
Janet Marie
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6 posted 2006-04-13 01:42 AM


sorting the lies from truth
but not the truth from lies

even transparent has some discoloring

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Oh you aint neva lied.
thats some title me groovy guy.



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