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greenlight
New Member

since 2006-04-09

Posts 2

0 posted 2006-04-09 09:29 PM

i ran away into the night
to find a place to stay
but i found out that night
i couldn't get away

i found my self in my room agian
with emptyness inside
i didn't know what to do
so i broke down and cried

fmlbarebackrider2001
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since 2005-11-16

Posts 138
West Texas, United States

1 posted 2006-04-09 11:13 PM

Sadly, I've been there. I'm sure every body has at one point or another. Great job and I hope to read more from you.

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

Androgynous
Member

since 2006-04-08

Posts 71

2 posted 2006-04-09 11:41 PM

Welcome, to this place I've just found myself, to vent whatever you might feel, down on an emtpty page. Enjoyed the read, though sad, hope you're ok.

Love

"How happy is the blameless vestal's lot!
The world forgetting, by the world forgot.
Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind!"

[This message has been edited by Androgynous (04-10-2006 08:30 AM).]

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2006-04-10 03:17 AM

oh what a sad poem

Welcome!

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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

4 posted 2006-04-10 05:21 AM

Sad poem but you expressed how you felt..thank you for the words...may i say welcome to pip..i am sure you can fit in here well...

Goldenrose.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2006-04-10 05:30 AM

Yet through your tears you manage to express your feelings through poetry! Welcome aboard these seas of blue where sail the finest of poets with the most compassionate hearts!

Giving you a big, warm welcoming hug,
Earth Angel

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2006-04-10 09:49 PM

I enjoyed this first post and I can relate so well to this.

I hope to read more from you.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2006-04-10 09:59 PM

Welcome to Passions, Greenlight!

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

8 posted 2006-04-10 10:41 PM

Welcome to Passions! May you find comfort and peace once your words pour out infront of you on these pages. And may you find comfort and peace amongst these wonderful sweet poets!

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Musicmaker1969

Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

9 posted 2006-04-10 10:59 PM

First of all, welcome to Passions. Secondly, I think everybody can relate to your poem, where you just don't know what to do so you break down and cry. There is nothing wrong with crying and I am glad you are free enough to do so.

Blesings,
Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2006-04-10 11:30 PM

welcome to Passions, where tears are felt within words

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