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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2006-04-09 05:30 PM


I
the me
who has the spot
not the one who's typing this
oops I think I slipped just now
recognizing that.


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OwlSA
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1 posted 2006-04-09 06:34 PM


A very interesting concept - presumably the you with the spot, the you who is typing and the you who realised and slipped.

- Owl

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2 posted 2006-04-09 06:39 PM


ego, superego and Id

and this is just a glimpse and a confession of sorts, that there are moments when I don't know who'd driving.



Hugs, sweet Owl

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3 posted 2006-04-09 06:48 PM


Short one this, I think I get it, but I'm not to sure, anyway, it made me think, figure that

Love  

"How happy is the blameless vestal's lot!
The world forgetting, by the world forgot.
Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind!"

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-04-09 06:58 PM


serenity,
You need at least two to go in any direction. LOL

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5 posted 2006-04-09 07:07 PM


::smiles::     Drive on.   When you get to where you're going... You will be there to greet yourself and no one will say... What took you so long?   LOL    :: bows ::
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6 posted 2006-04-09 08:41 PM


so THAT'S why you're always beside yourself!!
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7 posted 2006-04-09 09:03 PM


Although I fail today in holding my own
in Philosophy with all of our great minds
that portray a deeper semblance of interactive
intercourse, I do remember, with your poem,
a most delightful interchange with a professor
when studying a simplex conference of Freud.

I knew then, what I know now...

and it still amazes me.

For each level of the three
have levels of their own,
and deeper still
multiply.

Well done, Serenity.  

Well done.


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8 posted 2006-04-09 10:05 PM


Once you begin applying that old law of identity, you would first have to define what the entity is.     Any moment you start concentrating on only one facet of the entity more than the others, and are intent on putting focus on one particular part of it, you somehow manage to discover the identity of that part, but it doesn't contradict the identity of the whole. So I, will eventually right itself and become I., that is with the help of i.  Got that?

Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem

serenity blaze
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9 posted 2006-04-09 10:18 PM


um...I thought that was what i wuz sayin'.



We thank you all for reading.

iliana
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10 posted 2006-04-10 04:10 PM


LOL....much enjoyed this, Karen!     ....jojo
bubblesleave
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11 posted 2006-04-10 11:38 PM


That's me!

You've just penned my very exisitance!

WOW!

Bubbles

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12 posted 2006-04-11 01:32 AM




It's a contemplative poem the three of you have written. I have enjoyed it.


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13 posted 2006-04-11 03:22 PM


Gads, how do you turn me, myself and I around?  You, yourself and thou?  Or would it be mind, body and soul?  Or?

  LOL
    Rae

shirtless
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14 posted 2006-04-30 12:52 PM


The expression
"thought you confused me didn't I"
comes to mind.
Anyway the poem leaves me pleasantly confused.

Susan Caldwell
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15 posted 2006-04-30 11:45 AM


*glee*

there's three!!

love you ever so much lady.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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16 posted 2006-04-30 06:27 PM


good read
Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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17 posted 2006-05-01 08:01 PM


An interesting read serenity,
Who was driving?

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