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Surrendering
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Surrendering |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Surrendering Slipping into my skin this day, feeling a memory of love. Cherishing those touches, knowing the rose colored glasses have been packed away for sometime now, no longer needing them. Thawing temperatures controlling the imagination as I slide back under the covers waiting for the sun to rise one more time. Sweeping through the mindthoughts, smiling at the different shades of you, amused at what had been rearranged to suit my will. My own messenger of heart, spinning the day to come, leaning on the invitations, surrendering to a smile. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Slipping into my skin this day, feeling a memory of love." ~ Loved those lines! You come up with such uniquely expressive ones! "surrendering to a smile."  Oh, yes! Surrendering can be so sweet.  EA |
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Musicmaker1969 
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
Very beautuiful poem. I love slipping back into the covers too, to have an extra hour of sleep or so. lol Very lovely poem. Enjoyed it very much. Sheri Adams Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
like the cheerful tone to this |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Waiter! I'll have what she's having.  |
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BugBuggy Member
since 2005-12-19
Posts 130michigan |
I loved the first lines of slipping into my skin today and the memories of love the whole thing was wonderful and a very good read thank you for sharing with us all bugBUGGY |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I agree with all the others before me on this write. A beautiful read. Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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Androgynous Member
since 2006-04-08
Posts 71 |
"Sweeping through the mindthoughts, smiling at the different shades of you, amused at what had been rearranged to suit my will." What a beautiful poem this one, "the different shades of you", I just loved that line, beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!  Love "How happy is the blameless vestal's lot! |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
beautiful...this makes me remember another time in my life....that's been long packed away.....beautiful write lady |
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