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Open Poetry #37

The Last Goodbye

shades of paul
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since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

0 posted 2006-04-08 10:47 AM

Farewell to you, friends and family too.
I acknowledge all the ones I knew.
To never hurt or break your heart,
but still horizons grew apart.
And I know for certain there will be no call of the curtain.

In conclusion, my love did show,
and I hoped that it was all,
Quid pro quo, but no.

So long, but don't cry,
we'll meet again, goodbye.
For there was no peace without love,
from your morning dove,
paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

Musicmaker1969

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since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

1 posted 2006-04-09 02:04 AM

It is nice to see that your love finally did show, but it sounds like you lost that love all too soon. It is a happy yet sad poem all at once, which is hard to achieve. I think you did a swell job at this. Good write.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

sweetberry
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since 2006-03-29

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2 posted 2006-04-09 02:52 AM

I liked your sad poem..."For there was no peace without love"... That line did it for me!

shades of paul
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Posts 370
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3 posted 2006-04-09 09:26 AM

Thanks for your response and kind comments, Sheri.....paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

shades of paul
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since 2005-12-14

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4 posted 2006-04-09 09:28 AM

Your reply was nice, I also liked that line
best in the poem..........paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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5 posted 2006-04-09 05:16 PM

a bittersweet write, sadly beautiful...I love those kinds

*glad it was just a poem and you aren't leaving here *whew

shades of paul
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since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
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6 posted 2006-04-09 05:19 PM

Thanks,p.s. I'm not going anywhere...paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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