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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Absence My puppeteer has lost her way Today I sit and wait the day The sun has chased away the night But light alone can’t spirits bright The sun is passing over head My person feels the weight of lead I cannot dance and play romance Without my puppeteers enhance She touches me and pulls my strings And makes me do all sorts of things To interact like life alive Without her touch I can’t survive My puppeteer has lost her way And gloom has shadowed up my day The sun is up but I can’t run Without her touch there’s nothing done So if you see my puppeteer Pease tell her I am waiting here |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
My puppeteer has lost her way And gloom has shadowed up my day sometimes I think you can read my mind...and body   M |
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Androgynous Member
since 2006-04-08
Posts 71 |
"She touches me and pulls my strings And makes me do all sorts of things To interact like life alive Without her touch I can’t survive" So beautiful and playfull, I loved this  Love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
aw Sythis touches |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...me too! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"My puppeteer has lost her way Today I sit and wait the day" What a wonderful poem Sy. I hope your puppeteer returns soon. I will watch for her. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
always a joy My spirit will rise |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Nice write...I'll watch for her also |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Beautiful Sy, I'll be watching too! :-) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I found her for you!    [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-09-2006 09:37 AM).] |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wow Sy...I really enjoyed this one!!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Pull the shade up and let in the sun.  Androgynous Glad you enjoyed, thank you. passing, Thank you for understanding. Martie I understand.  Lady She's hard to see, a little on the misty side. MGROVES You are always a joy. sweetberry LOL just had you for breakfast. StevenS I knew you would, thank you. Earth Angel If anyone could I knew you would. scorpio And I am enjoying the replies. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I'm quite sure your puppeteer will be delighted to have been missed so much. Hoping for a speedy return! Great write! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
in absence everything else dims |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
To heck with a puppeteer, Find yourself a real girl. Put on your dancing shoes Take here for a whirl! Hey! That will cheer you I just know that it will. Use that pile of wood and string To re-build a window sill. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Honeybunch Thank you sweety. 1slick_lady, That's true. Sharon, Good suggestion but right now I have my hands full. |
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