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The Length of a Sigh
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The Length of a Sigh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Length of a Sigh I offer you bouquets of word Full of praise and sweet absurd From where I vie your coroners eye I offer you this length of sigh About your head are rainbow hues Your body lights the morning’s dew And when you smile you touch my wile To fill my mind with strange beguile You fill my heart with gentile rhyme You stop the tide of moving time Your spirit holds a flowers space Full of love and phantoms grace It’s oft we’d fly the skies of blue And make a fantasy come true For with the fiction of admire We’d fill the dream with met desire To be a moments butterfly Held upon a length of sigh |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hope you and your honey don't mind me saying, I can't help but feel the same way about you when I see your name pop up in these blue pages...you give so much warmth in your smiling words. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I agree. Thanks, Melton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautifully romantic piece here Sy! I hope you have a wonderful spring weekend. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
very nice "sigh" write psai..... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
About your head are rainbow hues Your body lights the morning’s dew And when you smile you touch my wile To fill my mind with strange beguile You fill my heart with gentile rhyme You stop the tide of moving time Your spirit holds a flowers space Full of love and phantoms grace ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ oh but you are the "moments butterfly" the length of a sigh???? well mine is thissssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss long after reading this gem of romantic rhymes... nothing better than a cadenced kissed sigh from you Sy-babers.  you and Randy get extra winkies for this one.  *L**ww*    |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A very good morning to you, Mr. T.! The sigh that this sonnet elicited from me was verrrry looooong, indeed! I do believe that the sonnets of William Shakespeare numbered less than 200, while yours, Sir Sonneteer, number beyond 2,000!!! Angel hugs 'n kisses, EA  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You are sweetness itself. Good morning dear. Melton Your agree is another pluss, thank you. Nancy Thank you dear and the top of the morning to you. Toerag You are a bright leaf this morning. JM I ate all the winkies do you have any more? Earth Angel Ya know you are the cutest Angel I know. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I have become hooked on your writings. Hope my husband doesn't mind. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
"You fill my heart with gentile rhyme You stop the tide of moving time" timeless tracing petals a blush smiling gentle the easel of Sy's art heaven's own breezes breathes soft the flowers of his heart Spring sings  thanks for sharing the music this morning! ~ Klassy [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (04-07-2006 11:46 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I always have more winkies for you. *S* and these are raspberry dipped. *L* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Much enjoyed this, Sy. Top of the mornin' to you!  ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the ending Sy as I always do |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krishankins Me too, thank you. JM vandana Thank you dear. iliana And the top of the afternoon to you passing Thank you my friend. |
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