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passing shadows
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0 posted 2006-04-09 07:42 PM



Mutual Empathy

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I held you
in my eyes
fumbling
for something
to tell you
about life
and why
you are dying

and you
did the same
for me.

~

© Copyright 2006 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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1 posted 2006-04-09 08:03 PM


A paused moment in time here..great...and the picture..hautningly beautiful..thank you..

Goldenrose

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2 posted 2006-04-10 08:25 AM


Like a snapshot in time this one, and yes, as a above, the picture...

Love

"How happy is the blameless vestal's lot!
The world forgetting, by the world forgot.
Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind!"

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3 posted 2006-04-10 10:44 AM


Wow...!!!

Eric

Martie
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4 posted 2006-04-10 11:36 AM


Dixie

Just the title and the picture would cause a Wow...but your poem added just the right amount of words to wonderful!  

JL
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5 posted 2006-04-10 12:20 PM


Beautiful.

JL


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6 posted 2006-04-10 12:45 PM



Dixie, your entire post is so breathtaking, that I am now breathless!


Linda
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7 posted 2006-04-10 08:37 PM


great title and poem!  Quite a little gem here, Dixie!

miscellanea

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