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StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

0 posted 2006-04-05 11:14 AM

A Golden Moment

You have placed yourself,
so warmly in my heart.
And I would love to tell you so,
but I wouldn't know where to start.

You have cried with me when I was sad,
your sholder was all I needed.
You have sought to light my darkened path,
and you have more than succeeded.

So if you should ever,
find the rain falling upon your head,
If sometime you find yourself,
tossing in your bed.

If you should ever think,
the sun will never shine again.
Remember that golden moment,
we realized we were friends.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2006-04-05 11:20 AM

"You have placed yourself,
so warmly in my heart.
And I would love to tell you so,
but I wouldn't know where to start."

WOW!
At the beginning, man at the beginning.
You have started off great with this.
A really great write StevenS.

JL

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

2 posted 2006-04-05 11:24 AM

Thank You JL, I've had many golden moments here on the blue pages. :-)

sweetberry
Member

since 2006-03-29

Posts 125

3 posted 2006-04-05 11:43 AM

Wow!!! A Golden Moment, is like a stolen moment to cherish. I like it...

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

4 posted 2006-04-05 11:47 AM

Thank you Sweetberry, may you have many such moments!:-)

And thanks again JL, I fixed it! A Golden Moment? :-)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2006-04-05 11:59 AM

this was beautiful...friends are priceless and few and far between...so in this you are blessed...

beautifully written

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2006-04-05 12:09 PM

Steve, this is such a heartfelt write!
Such a special moment!

thanks for sharing

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

7 posted 2006-04-05 12:52 PM

You've dipped your pen
into your heart and penned
a golden song

Of dawning love and morning
sun to hum the whole
day long

For blue skies do
sometimes hide, though
we own them all the while

It's certainly true,
the heart of you
holds me in a smile

~ Klassy

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2006-04-05 01:35 PM

Beautiful Steven..
and it is a golden moment when two realise what great friends they are!
Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2006-04-05 02:21 PM

Steven...so sweetly said!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

10 posted 2006-04-05 10:57 PM

Genuine words.. excellent poem Steven.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2006-04-06 08:58 AM

May your life be filled with such Golden Moments! Anyone who can count you among their friends, is very fortunate indeed!

I'm smiling, my friend!

With kindred smiles 'n hugs,
from one of your friends!

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

12 posted 2006-04-06 10:56 AM

Thank You all so much for brighting up my life and for all the Golden Moments! :-)

BROTHER JOHN
Member

since 2006-04-06

Posts 386

13 posted 2006-04-06 01:08 PM

STEVEN, THANKS FOR YOUR POEM ON THOSE MOMENTS OF GRACE. I'VE LEARNED, TOO, THAT SOMETIMES WE SEE THOSE GOLDEN MOMENTS ONLY WHEN THEY HAVE PASSED. THANKS

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