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curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england

0 posted 2006-04-05 08:15 AM



I look at you
Stare into you with that meaningful look
You know I’m hurting
But you look away

Do you not care anymore?
Can you not handle it?

I gave you all of my loving
You gave me all of your loving

Do really want to throw it all away
Do you really want to leave me like this?

I know you still love me
I know you still want me

We can make it work
It takes a little commitment
And we’ll be alright.

I promise.

Curioustity is a fine gift...

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-04-05 12:51 PM


endearing write
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2006-04-05 03:27 PM


been on both sides here

good write, very heartfelt

curiouse
Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england
3 posted 2006-04-05 03:36 PM


thankyou for your comments and understanding here,
i appreciate it,
smiles,
curiouse

Curioustity is a fine gift...

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