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fmlbarebackrider2001
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since 2005-11-16
Posts 138
West Texas, United States

0 posted 2006-04-05 07:31 AM


There comes a time in life
When one must stop and think
Look around their life
And hope they've made their break
From the normal every day
To doing what they love
How boring would it be
To realize what you see
Is just like everyone else
Nothing special nothing new

When you take a like
At how you life is working out
And find that you're not quiet happy
With how things turned out
Do something different
It doesn't have to be big
Make a child laugh and smile
Or let someone know you care
Then sit back and watch
As the flower grows in your life
For when you give
It will, one day, come back.

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

© Copyright 2006 Cory - All Rights Reserved
curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england
1 posted 2006-04-05 08:29 AM


i love it.
this poem has so much truth and then i love how you turned it around in the end.
thanx,
curiouse

Curioustity is a fine gift...

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-04-05 08:59 AM


such energetic advise, a very positive right/write...thank you
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2006-04-05 12:11 PM


I love this! So positive and uplifting!
sweetberry
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since 2006-03-29
Posts 125

4 posted 2006-04-05 12:21 PM


I like your message...it seems so clear but yet so distant to so many people!
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