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sweetberry
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0 posted 2006-04-05 01:29 AM


Whose Confused


You must have me confused
I'm not the one you can misuse
Abuse
Throw me out, like im old news
Tolerate it, PLEASE, I simply refuse
You're the wrong one, Why do I stand accuse?
I've walked a mile in her shoes
Now mine is worn and used
Your confused
I am my own woman, I do as I choose
I'm not the one confused
I've paid my dues
Turned your rainy skies into a sunny hew
Your still trying to use
Igniting a very short fuse
I'm just amused
How you have me confused
With someone who should've been old news
It's not a hard choice...Don't act confused!!!


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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2006-04-05 01:52 AM


welcome..... standing up for yourself is always the right thing to do.....enjoyed this....

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

sweetberry
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2 posted 2006-04-05 02:38 AM


Thank you Greeneyes! Just one of those moments when you take a double look at a situation and wonder"am I confused"? I look forward to reading some upcoming work from you!!    I'm glad I joined passions.  
passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-04-05 03:49 AM


welcome sweetberry!

this is a great write, telling it like it is!

I'll be looking for more from you!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-04-05 08:43 AM


Welcome to Passions!
I'm sure you will enjoy your stay here.
I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

LeeJ
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5 posted 2006-04-05 08:49 AM


Welcome to Passions
this was full of passion


StevenS
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6 posted 2006-04-05 10:21 AM


Way to go sweetberry! And welcome! :-)
sweetberry
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7 posted 2006-04-05 11:33 AM


Thanx for the warm welcome!  I'm happy to be amongst some of the most talented writers.
Dixie; Nancy; lee J; Steven S - much love...

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8 posted 2006-04-05 12:51 PM



Welcome to the blue pages of PiP~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -     noles1@totcon.com     

Midnitesun
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Gaia
9 posted 2006-04-05 05:20 PM


who's confused?
apparently not you

The Lady
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The Southwest
10 posted 2006-04-05 05:26 PM




Keep it up sweetberry! Welcome.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
11 posted 2006-04-05 06:58 PM


Welcome ~~

M

tracie66
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12 posted 2006-04-06 06:45 AM


Welcome to passions - home to everyone

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



Susan Caldwell
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13 posted 2006-04-10 02:34 PM


"I've paid my dues"

I used to think that..but have recently discovered that it is nothing compared to some.

Welcome to Pip! I enjoyed.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Goldenrose
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14 posted 2006-04-10 05:53 PM


Welcome to PIP a fine first post..thank you..

Goldenrose

terasinas
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15 posted 2006-04-11 01:18 AM


Haha! Great rap you got goig there Sweets!
Great Attitude too ... Tell him girl!
Welcome .. enjoyed your poem, it made me smile  

tera

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