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pepperdaconvict
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0 posted 2006-04-04 09:37 PM


Anger, Aggression, All of the hatred and depression
Progression of these warped thoughts in my head is an obsession
The lesson I have learnt from all this drama never will..
amount to a certain feeling, that I get when I spill..
Emotions down on paper, Ever greater when it builds
The tension, not to mention, The venture to the hills
The deepest valleys over shadow, My little feeble life
Confusion everlasting, like bombs blasting at my strife
Hands clasping at the knife, With the tightest grip
I feel my heart start breaking, with just the slightest rip
That's all it takes to verify, the terror deep inside
Never let my soul break free, but never let it hide
Words release a masterpiece, You'll never understand
Although I try to rectify, My world is still un-planned
My sense is gone, I will go on, To speak forever true
My quest to just invest in faith, and let my feelings through


pepperdaconvict


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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2006-04-04 09:48 PM


My quest to just invest in faith, and let my feelings through''''


You've done just that....


welcome.....

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2006-04-04 10:10 PM


Welcome to Passions.
Well done, a deluge of promise here.
TD

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3 posted 2006-04-04 10:21 PM


Welcome aboard, and I just loved your first poem.  It reads out a good message ,and to a really great rap beat, at least to my ears.  Well done.
fmlbarebackrider2001
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4 posted 2006-04-04 11:32 PM


Welcome welcome! Great poem and a nice start. Can't wait to read more.

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

sweetberry
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5 posted 2006-04-05 12:02 PM


Welcome to Passions!  Nice Start.  Hope there's more where that came from...
The Lady
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6 posted 2006-04-05 12:22 PM




Wow! Nice start pepper. Welcome.


pepperdaconvict
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7 posted 2006-04-05 09:10 AM


I appreciate all who took some time to leave feedback.


pepperdaconvict

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