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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Every time I think about crying I shake my head, swallow it hard, and keep on trying... {I whisper Help me get there....} There, is that someplace, any place that differs from where I now am because it is to dark here and it leaves me feeling scared... Right now how melancholic to have to be me.... The future comes in the form of another day, and as he would say Just because someone feels something somehow in this moment, right here, right now doesn't mean that they will tomorrow. .... seems that he was correct, and I've found a new phrase that I can borrow. Time spent, tired, half in daze eyes focused directly in distant gaze speaking to anyone at all who might here I'm tired, help me get there.... Tired, Lord I'm tired, life is wearing me smooth down to the bone....{Toby K} |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
... this works for me. I know that brand of tar'd. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
There, is that someplace, any place that differs from where I now am Yes, that place exists, if we in our minds, allow it...such a painting of life, and our stubborness....we act out like children sometimes when we don't get our ways....or when things do not seem to meld as we would have them... wonderful poetry... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I know this feeling well. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yea....I live on "RedBull" now...know exactly what you're talking about sweetie.. (Okay, so it's REd Bull and vodka...) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
just close your eyes and count to 10 it will be better after enjoyed your softy stuff ms |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Hang in there, Gentle Spirit. I have just put in an order for a wonderful moment for you tomorrow, and for it to be repeated daily with the length of it doubled by the day! Hate that you feel this way, even if it means that you translate it into beautiful art for us to share. - Owl |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
But if it were not for your way of explaining, for your kind words, and gracious smile, we would all be the worse off. Time and the rain smoothes the stone, this is true. And that time and weathering reveals the gold inside, and you share that gold with those you meet, so well. The Lord has bless you in your weariness, with your way of expression, and a reason for it. JL  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"There, is that someplace, any place that differs from where I now am" I know that feeling Gentle Spirit and I hope it gets better.  |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Wow, this is a powerful expression. Great job. Ben “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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