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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-04-04 08:16 AM



noah is back again
with no-doze in his pockets
and some java junkie boys
from down in tweekerville
building a fishin yacht this time

seems he went to see his aunt
in artica and watched the summer
in greenland bare foot
got the urges to build again
something much faster with fenders

for he and the boys to fish from
maybe a window seat or two
for some veggies and herbs
and a view for the afternoons
when they watch the sun get swallowed

like a ball o fire by a rainbow
and there will be a few more
than just two worms on this sail
maybe some pine grub buckets
and a plethora of minnows

with the spam cans and velveeta

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daark

scribblenote: just a what if..the ocean is getting deeper ya know..oh yeah and it is still raining texas here at the beach.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-04-04 08:26 AM


and a view for the afternoons
when they watch the sun get swallowed

like a ball o fire by a rainbow
and there will be a few more

~*~

Don't be stingy...send some our way.
We're dusty...
with grit and charm




Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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2 posted 2006-04-04 08:26 AM


*stampin my foot*
I wanna sea the ocean again, darnnniittt....



Loved this am spot of sun D....thanks for the views through your eyes...

LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-04-04 09:08 AM


this was a poem fit for a king, and I bet it even made the ol man smile?  Yes?  

Hugs and good morning...

enjoyed very much

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
4 posted 2006-04-04 11:56 AM


velveeta and vienna sausages, dipped and used as bait...caught my hunger...so did this....unusal and well written..roll me one up..will ya?
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2006-04-04 12:54 PM


thanks pipamigos..

you all bless me with your waves..brother toe' would be pleased to hook up some channel cats with ya, thanks

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-04-04 04:46 PM




"and there will be a few more
than just two worms on this sail
maybe some pine grub buckets
and a plethora of minnows

with the spam cans and velveeta"

Yup, love it Stranger.


Martie
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7 posted 2006-04-04 05:08 PM


DS

Fishin the ocean with velveeta could catch you something more than a cold!!  Caught a rainbow once myself with it....rainbow trout!  

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8 posted 2006-04-04 10:05 PM


you bring forth many a memory....hugsss you...

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

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