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time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

0 posted 2006-04-18 01:09 AM

Wandering on a fine
Autumnal morn.
Watching the leaves
Of the tree’s ejaculating
In the gentle breeze.
I find myself
Aching in the daylight,
For a night moon, shining
With inquisitive ecstasy
Slowly rolling into
A morning, weeping
Red fire and laughter
Of the nights pleasures.
Such are the thoughts
Of your soft intrusion
On the pillow of my mind.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

1 posted 2006-04-18 03:22 AM

Such thoughts are beautiful! May you find your "night moon".

bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04

Posts 197
Bloomington, IN

2 posted 2006-04-18 03:56 AM

Love your poem...but, just a warning.

I've had poems REMOVED for using the "E" word...

But, maybe they will let you slide...I'm not too popular round herabouts...

Great Job.....

still...watch that "ejaculating" word...it might turn someone on!!!!!

Jack Straw
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since 2006-03-02

Posts 70

3 posted 2006-04-18 08:41 AM

interesting thoughts and a great way of expressing night turning to day. I especially liked the ending.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

4 posted 2006-04-18 08:53 AM

You have very interesting trees down your way! Would they grow in a northern climate? lol

Sorry, my naughty mind went on a wild tangent. This was lovely poem. I enjoyed reading it. ~ perhaps a little bit tooo much!

Earthy Angel

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

5 posted 2006-04-18 04:59 PM

Such are the thoughts
Of your soft intrusion
On the pillow of my mind.

lovely thoughts as our season turns more summer like every day~~~

M

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

6 posted 2006-04-19 12:10 PM

Helen, I think I did, not far from the Lions Head.

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

7 posted 2006-04-19 12:12 PM

bubblesleave,

Perhaps your contextual use was of a different calibre. Thank you for your response.

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

8 posted 2006-04-19 12:13 PM

Jack Straw, thanks for stopping by, pleased you enjoyed.

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

9 posted 2006-04-19 12:15 PM

Earth Angel,

I am sure the trees would grow in any hemisphere. May your tangent always go awry. Thank you for the read.

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

10 posted 2006-04-19 12:21 PM

Maureen,

Ones thoughts are always wandering. Mine were with you on hearing of your loss.

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

11 posted 2006-04-19 01:36 AM

tp - I know of a Lion's Head but have not climbed (never will) for the view. Beautiful picture! Thanks!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

12 posted 2006-04-19 03:19 AM

beautiful

I enjoyed

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

13 posted 2006-04-19 06:27 AM

Frank thank you for your kind words, always ...

such a lovely picture from a trained eye...
Hope all is well down under

M

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

14 posted 2006-04-19 06:34 AM

The poem was lovely. I am not a visual person, so the picture has me confuzzled!

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