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curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england

0 posted 2006-04-04 07:24 AM



It’s kind of sad because….

You are my inspiration,
You are my one and only,
You are heaven and you are hell
You are my lover and you are my hater,
You are the one I will spend the rest of my life with.
You are the one that I can't wait to get away from.

I am your inspiration,
I am your one and only,
I am your heaven and hell,
I am your lover and you hater,
I am the one you will spend the rest of you life with.
I am the one you can't wait to get away from

We are everything to each other,
We are each others worlds,
Each others lovers,
Each others minds,
We depend on one another,
We give life to one another.

We are each others inspiration,
We are each others muse for life.
We are each others life.

We are I and you.

Curioustity is a fine gift...

© Copyright 2006 whatever you want it to be - All Rights Reserved
curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england
1 posted 2006-04-04 12:56 PM


Hi
(this is not the best of my poems)


Curioustity is a fine gift...

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2006-04-04 05:01 PM


"I am your heaven and hell,
I am your lover and you hater,
I am the one you will spend the rest of you life with.
I am the one you can't wait to get away from"

Hummmmmm....
I think I know you.
Do you have a picture?


Sing opera. Heart and soul.  The blues.  Crying in your beer, but not:
"I am the one you can't wait to get away from"


You make light…
No?

JL

curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england
3 posted 2006-04-04 05:41 PM


hey,
thankyou for posting.no i love you for posting.lol.
you liked my poem?
good
i like you,
smiles,
curiouse

Curioustity is a fine gift...

sweetberry
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since 2006-03-29
Posts 125

4 posted 2006-04-05 02:20 AM


Your poem has a certain twist that I just love!!!  We offen come to feel this way about our life partners.  
bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04
Posts 197
Bloomington, IN
5 posted 2006-04-06 04:15 AM


One of your very best girl (me thinks).

keep writing!

Hugs,
Bubbles

curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england
6 posted 2006-04-06 05:01 AM


thankyou for your response bubblesleave and stawberry.
smiles,
curiouse

Curioustity is a fine gift...

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

7 posted 2006-04-06 06:43 AM


Now, to me, this dipicts real love...real relationships and reality...we are not always at our best, together....

yet, it is those difficult times that changes love...pushes love, so to speak, into a stronger emotion...going thru the tough times together, yanno?  

well done

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
8 posted 2006-04-06 06:48 AM


well penned - many will relate

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england
9 posted 2006-04-06 08:11 AM


thankyou tracie 66 and leej i totally know what your saying and understand
thanx again for posting,
smiles,
curiouse

Curioustity is a fine gift...

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