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evomx5
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since 2005-07-11
Posts 52
Atlanta, GA

0 posted 2006-04-03 05:27 PM



Come to me in darkest night
When demons hold my thoughts to light
Exposing all my secrets, deep
That gives me nightmares in my sleep

Come to me when in my bed
I lie in semi-conscious dread
Of what the night will have in store
Dreams and fears and so much more

Come to me and take my hand
Against these demons take a stand
Protect me from their wrath and scorn
Pull from me their jagged thorn

Come to me and hold me close
Chase away my memory's ghosts
That I'll not fear the sun's lost shine
And peaceful sleep will e'er be mine.



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Klassy Lassy
Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
1 posted 2006-04-03 06:48 PM


  It's nice to see you again!  

Beautifully written angst, Mike.  You always touch my heart.

~ Karen

shades of paul
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since 2005-12-14
Posts 370
In Reality
2 posted 2006-04-03 10:42 PM


A good one that I enjoyed...paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2006-04-04 09:38 PM


Welcome to Passions.
Enjoyed the meter of your well thought write.
TD

pepperdaconvict
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since 2006-04-04
Posts 8

4 posted 2006-04-04 09:48 PM


"Protect me from their wrath and scorn
Pull from me their jagged thorn"

I feel that.

pepperdaconvict

greysolace
Member
since 2006-03-27
Posts 71

5 posted 2006-04-04 11:08 PM


ooooo very very nice. feelin the emotion and thought there....

~~Poetry is written emotion~~
greysolace

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
6 posted 2006-04-05 12:20 PM




"Come to me and hold me close
Chase away my memory's ghosts
That I'll not fear the sun's lost shine
And peaceful sleep will e'er be mine."

So very well done.


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