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..Hold me..
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..Hold me.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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 Perhaps tonight if you don't mind could you would you...just hold me? Just for this evening this one time.. no need for talk about our day and what others had to say.. please let your love surround me enfold me ~ just let me be. In your arms I feel sheltered protected nothing can harm or hurt me.. I am free of all pain and the world is at peace. There will be time to talk to laugh to discuss our lives and decide which path we need to travel but now, for tonight please just hold me? . |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
What a delight. Nice write. JL  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
There are times like this....yes, I understand. Lovely, NancyLee.....jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Aww, yes... I do so know what you mean ~ and you have expressed that ever so softly and sweetly.  |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Of course he will...who could resist? :-) |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
that was wonderfull! i am in ore of you, curiouse |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
When holding's the thing Just let your heart sing You'll hear the bells ring And be lifted on wing. Wouldst that I were the holder! Beautifully written. Hugs, Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful ... just beautiful. luv & miss ya !!! Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
feeling got at love? hold fast thinking of you michael |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
A beautiful moment of tenderness exquisitely expressed. - Owl |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Well this is a tender write here Nancy, enjoyed reading it very much..thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy, this is such tenderness. Beautifully done. Much enjoyed...Now if a duet.... oh well...just dreaming. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
sometimes no words need to be spoken, thanks Nancy for the reminder.....hugssss Lady And so it those we live with |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Nancy, this made me tear up reading this because I feel just this way almost every day in my dreams and daydreams, wanting to just hold my dream girl in them as though she's really here in my life now, and it can get most heartaching escaping my dreams sometimes and still long for her to come and I can really hold her and give her all her golden heart desires! (wipes tear) This is soooooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, you have a loving golden heart that deserves to be blessed with this true, precious love forever and ever, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
exactly! wonderfully said! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Nancy, The security and comfort that loving arms bring... You write it so eloquently. hugs, miscellanea |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Ohhh! me, too. I hope he guards you from storms always. I can't think of anything better than being in the arms of one you love, knowing he wants you there, too. I am wistfully bewitched in the soft enchantment you pen! ~ Sis |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
'and never let go, a very good one...paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A simple act with such powerful results. Wonderfully written Tinker. believe in what your heart feels... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
so, when is your first romance novel? this was so pretty so, soft and intimately full of love. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Nancy, you expressed this need, so well. Beautiful! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Thank you all so very much for taking the time to read and reply. You are all so much appreciated! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I volunteer? |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
quote: For some reason, this stanza really struck me. I like the picture of enfolding love. Thank you for sharing... Ben “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
An excellent idea...James |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
Very Enchanting Makes me want to be held tight...Nice! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
This expresses the tenderness of love. The fact that you had so many responses show most women feel the same. best, martyjo |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great Nancy - sometimes we feel that way and you say it so very well - Paul |
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