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Huan Yi
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0 posted 04-02-2006 06:49 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


The rain shines
On the road outside

Still leafless
The branches darkly
Vein a somber sky

A small lost dog
Trembling with cold
Scratches at the door

An old love
Not wanting
To be forgotten

The little whimper
Wet with hope


[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (04-02-2006 08:45 PM).]

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terasinas
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Michigan ... The Great Lakes


1 posted 04-02-2006 06:54 PM       View Profile for terasinas   Email terasinas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit terasinas's Home Page   View IP for terasinas

Devine ... What wonderful images

tera
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love it!
Midnitesun
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I really like this one, John
Juju
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In your dreams


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This is a sad poem to me...
I liked it alot.

-Juju

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Huan Yi
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Thanks everyone.

I am not creative, merely responsive to
and reflective of  a given moment,
though something numinous from the past
sometimes glides in.

Thanks again.

John

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6 posted 04-27-2007 03:57 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

what a day day and what period of life.
somebody sing it out
somebody swollow it in.

poem of indifference.
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