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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-04-02 06:49 PM



The rain shines
On the road outside

Still leafless
The branches darkly
Vein a somber sky

A small lost dog
Trembling with cold
Scratches at the door

An old love
Not wanting
To be forgotten

The little whimper
Wet with hope


[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (04-02-2006 08:45 PM).]

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terasinas
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Michigan ... The Great Lakes
1 posted 2006-04-02 06:54 PM


Devine ... What wonderful images

tera

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-04-02 07:09 PM


love it!
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2006-04-02 11:21 PM


I really like this one, John
Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2006-04-03 12:06 PM


This is a sad poem to me...
I liked it alot.

-Juju

-<>-~-<>-~-<>-  
*    Juju     *
-<>-~-<>-~-<>-

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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5 posted 2006-04-03 03:10 PM



Thanks everyone.

I am not creative, merely responsive to
and reflective of  a given moment,
though something numinous from the past
sometimes glides in.

Thanks again.

John


Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-04-27 03:57 PM


what a day day and what period of life.
somebody sing it out
somebody swollow it in.

poem of indifference.

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