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A Broken Flower
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A Broken Flower |
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Brokenflower New Member
since 2006-04-02
Posts 5 |
A broken flower My heart, Like a petal on a delicate poppy Before you My Strength, Like the sturdy stem on a sunflower Until I met you My Trust, As honest as the smell of a Rose Till you sprayed your poison My Smile, Beaming like the sun on the heather Till your rain Me A broken flower For you |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Sad... but a nice poem! I enjoyed the read! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions. A poignant heartfelt write. I enjoyed the poppy petal line. But I find those poppy petals are actually quite resilient, able to withstand even strong winds.  |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
ouch. welcome. I think I will enjoy your presence. (: |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome aboard, Broken Flower! I do believe your heart, strength, trust and smile will be restored now that you are among kindred spirits!  You may want to change your name after awhile!  Warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel  |
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Brokenflower New Member
since 2006-04-02
Posts 5 |
A name change is in my sights for sure! Thanks for the warm welcome. |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
This flower is not broken,it just needs a little sunshine, very nice poem...paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
~Welcome~ I enjoyed this muchly and look forward to more of your poetry  Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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