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StevenS
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0 posted 2006-04-01 11:06 AM



Fishin

When I was a little boy not more than four or five,
daddy took me on my first fishin trip.
He said,"Now pay attention son,
don't give me any lip.
What you learn here today,
you may not fully understand,
but these here fishes,
are a lot like your fellowman."

As we settled in on that creek bank,
at his favorite fishin hole.
We took a minute or two to admire,
our long cane fishin pole.
Daddy said," These fishin poles,
grow right here along these banks.
God knew we'ed need em,
so first lets give him thanks.

Then I said, "But daddy,...
your fishin pole is long and limber,
strung with catgut line,
your bobber is big and red,
but take a look at mine!
My fishin pole is short and stiff,
my bobber ain't much bigger than a dime!
Would you still be thanking God,
if my fishin pole was yours,
and your fishin pole was mine?"

The old man looked at me,
with smiling blue eyes and said,
"Bigger ain't always better son,
more don't always satisfy.
Like this here creek is filled with fishes,
the world is filled with lies.

Now they've got some real nice rod and reels,
down at the hardware store,
with a mile of catgut on a spool,
but what do we need that for?
This little creek,
is fifty feet at it's widest spot.
We don't need that fancy rod and reel,
we need what we got.

Now look at you and me son,
my arms are long, my hands are big,
I'm a full grown man.
I cut these fishin poles,
just to fit our hand.
While you fishin on this side of the creek,
I'll be fishin on that,
you'll be catching brim and perch,
I'll be catching cat.
It works out just fine too don't it son,
my fishin pole being long,
and yours being short,
me being big and you being small?
Them fishes better watch out,
or you and me might catch em all!"


We bowed our heads then daddy and me,
as I clutched my short and perfect fishin pole.
We thanked God for our long canes,
and the fish in the fishin hole.
Daddy thanked God for a lot of things,
I wish I could remember it all.
Cause when daddy was finished prayin,
my fishin pole was long enough,
and I was ten feet tall.

Now we had an old water bucket,
filled with dirt and wiggle worms.
When daddy said to hand him one,
I thought of what momma said,
about dirty hands and germs.
I thought maybe,...
I could fish him out one with a stick.
But the way those wiggle worms were wigglin,
I knew that would be quite a trick!

Daddy must have read my mind,
cause he grinned at me and said,
"Don't worry son, that ain't dirty dirt.
We fishermen know what to do,
we just wipe it on our shirt!"
So I dug my hands in the cool moist dirt,
that filled the old water bucket.
Those wiggle worms might as well been snakes,
but for daddy I would rise above it.

Somehow he knew I'd conqured my fear,
and what a mighty effort it was.
Because he noted the attributes of my fearsome catch,
as only a daddy does.
"Woah! This one like to have been a snake!
If he was any bigger,
we'ed have to save him for the lake!"

My heart was poundin a mite,
my hand might have shook.
As daddy showed me how,
to put that wiggle worm on a hook.
But as we did the dirty deed,
he started tellin me about the fish,
and how a wiggle worm was their favorite dish.

He said, " this fishin hole is deep in spots,
thats what the catfish like.
They lay on the bottom where it's dark,
they don't care much for the light.
They get real big sometimes,
just waiting patient,
for the current to provide their food.
I guess you could say lazy,
best describes the catfishes mood."

"And in this fishin hole,
there's lots of perch and brim.
They'll eat anything that moves,
if it's not bigger than them.
They find strength in numbers,
it's what we call a school.
Hit hard and fast,
get every bite you can!
Thats their Golden Rule.
They lurk in the shadows,
in the tree roots along the bank.
Their greedy little rascals,
who can't resist a wiggler,
they just can't!"

"Now there's other fish in this creek,
like the bass and the pike,
maybe a carp or two,
a gar and the like.
But you can't learn everything in just one day,
so lets talk a bit of those little minnows there,
you see swiming away.

They never get very big,
even when their full grown.
They rarely get much more,
than an inch or two long.
But if I had to be a fish in this fishin hole,
I'd be a little minnow.
You can't catch one with a pole!

And the moral of this epic fish tail is...:-)

Being a little fish has it's advantages! :-)

© Copyright 2006 Steven E. Stone - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2006-04-01 11:39 AM


It would take me forever to tell you how much I enjoyed your fish tale and on how many levels!!!

There was ~

charm, morals, a captivating story-line, naughty innuendos (or that's just my naughty mind working overtime! lol), realism, folksiness, lessons, love, nature, ... I could go on ad infinitum!

Yeppers, Steven, I LOVED it! ~ and I'm saving it and I plan on sharing it with my father! Not only does he love to fish, he instilled the love for fishing in me. One of the things that I enjoyed about our fishing times together, was his sharing his stories and wisdom with me. He's going to love the poem ~ and you!



Loving hug and a huge warm smile!
Linda

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2 posted 2006-04-01 11:46 AM


Steven, this story/lesson is all that EA said and more.

I love fishin myself.

This indeed is a keeper!!!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Sunshine
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3 posted 2006-04-01 11:48 AM


Linda...I saw a little naughty or two myself.  

But as for the whole of the epic?

Steve, I'm just glad you weren't taking in the ocean!




StevenS
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4 posted 2006-04-01 12:08 PM


Ladies...Ladies, to what ever naughty might you be refering??? I...I...am at a loss! :-)

Thank you Earth Angel, I'm so glad you loved and will share it with your dad! :-)

Nancy, you can't use "and more" when your discussing little fish! :-)

Sunshine I'm glad knee deep is enough! :-)

Martie
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5 posted 2006-04-01 12:35 PM


Steven

I loved the love and wisdom in this poem!!  I'm going to share it with my fisher-husband who knows the rule about wiping the worm gooo on his pants or shirt or what-have-you.  I always have me a rag for that.   Thanks for this!  

StevenS
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L. A. (Lower Alabama)
6 posted 2006-04-01 04:26 PM


Martie, You made my day! :-)
terasinas
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7 posted 2006-04-01 08:06 PM


Wonderful story poem Steven ... I most enjoyed. What a terrific dad!

tera

JL
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8 posted 2006-04-01 11:36 PM


This is a great story!
You kin to Huck Finn?
Great read.

JL


Martie
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9 posted 2006-04-01 11:58 PM


Steven...Taylor loved this poem!!
The Lady
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10 posted 2006-04-02 01:00 AM




I loved your story too Steven. Made me remember fishing with my daddy and praying not to catch anything. It wasn't the fishing I was after. It was time with Daddy and his stories. Wonderful lessons here.

Klassy Lassy
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11 posted 2006-04-02 01:20 AM


Steven, you are a super story teller, too.  Do you want to teach me how to fish?   My Grandad bought me a fishing pole and a reel when I was about 12, but I don't remember every catching anything with it.  However, when I was 16, my uncle would take me and his boys to jig for herring on summer evenings in the bay.  That was fun.  Hadn't thought of it for years.

I like the love in this poem the best.  It's just how it should be between a father and his son!  

~ Klassy

[This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (04-02-2006 11:11 PM).]

iliana
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12 posted 2006-04-02 03:09 AM


Steven, I adore this poem.  It brought such special memories back to me of my Grandpa teaching me to fish with a cane pole.  It occurred to me while I was reading something my Granddaddy taught me about worms.....when I got past the "fear" you mentioned, Grandpa made sure I put that worm "just so"...on the hook.  He insructed me that if a baby fish got hooked we wouldn't want to eat it and we wouldn't want to kill it if the hook damaged it too badly.  

Thank you for bringing such fond memories to the surface.....great poem!  .....jo

StevenS
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L. A. (Lower Alabama)
13 posted 2006-04-02 08:04 AM


Thank You Tera, this fish tale is taken from memories of me and my dad and also from rasing three sons of my own. We lived on such a creek. :-)

Thank You JL, may be! I built a raft once when I was a kid, I practically live on the Tennessee river. :-)

Thank You Martie, is that Rainbow Trout I smell cookin? :-)

Thank You Lady, theres something about fishin that makes fond memories, even the parts that we feared. :-)

Thank You Klassy, I will surly teach you the fine art of canepole fishin next time I'm in your neck of the woods. In the mean time may I suggest you brush up on your jug fishin technique with your gran babies. :-)

Thank You iliana, there is a correct way to bait a hook, but I will spare you the gory details or as Martie noted the gooy details! :-)

Thank you all for sharing your memories. It looks like a great day for making some new ones! May the fish get so excited when they see you coming they jump in your boats! :-)


ice
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14 posted 2006-04-02 09:11 AM


Oh, I like this one, Steven...I started out fising very much like you did.

"We don't need that fancy rod and reel,
we need what we got." (My dad said the same thing)

Sop true, so true....fishing is now high tech for many people...I believe technology is making fishing too complicated..

I know some icefishermen that cannot catch a fish without a sonar...

But I also know a man that could lay an adams lightly on the water with a broomstick and clothes line, and never make a splash...

This is a wonderful poem that every
fisher(boy)man should read.

----------ice
   ><>

StevenS
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L. A. (Lower Alabama)
15 posted 2006-04-02 01:00 PM


Thank You Ice, we have a shad minnow run here every year and the Striped Bass go crazy. You can drop a shiny object in the water and catch a fish about everytime. I've seen guys tie a beer tab onto a hook and catch a load. No hi tech needed! :-)
Klassy Lassy
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Oregon
16 posted 2006-04-02 11:14 PM


haha!  Guess that's a new technique that takes fumble fingers, Steven!  Looks like I could use a little practice at something else, too....   But I'll bet you know all about jug fishing.  

~ Karen

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