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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-03-31 09:30 AM



I feel what I see
when there is emptiness
in front of me

the locked door
keyed for one
the noise of quiet when
crossing the threshold

the thoughts of smiles
that use to be
enjoying another's
company

looking into the past
from the future
leaves a trail of
maybes...

maybe
life wasn't so bad back then
maybe
there isn't a better tomorrow
maybe
all there is
is already here

So I am feeling what I see
as I open the door
to the outside

and see that...
nothing has really changed.
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2006 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2006-03-31 11:18 AM


"nothing has really changed"


You are breaking my heart.
But this was soooooo good!
Great write.

JL


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2006-03-31 02:24 PM


does it ever?

Sometimes I set my expectations too high and then am disappointed at the same ole same ole

nice write

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