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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2006-03-31 07:09 AM


It’s Here

Its here I see a moments pause
And offer up sincere applause
To let my needle sew a stitch
To stop the swiftness of the pitch

This pause of picture makes you think
It gives you entry by a wink
It lets you place your feet a path
It even lets you take a bath

Off you go into the mist
A magic carpets mental twist
Sailing on a rainbows sea
Sipping on the tea of free

A phantom holds you by the hand
A spirit guides you through the land
It takes you through illusions eye
You’ve left behind your humble pie

Each picture threads the thread of hope
It weaves for me an endless rope


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Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
1 posted 2006-03-31 07:54 AM


For me..just enough rope to hang myself...
interesting write Sigh....do you stay up nights thinking up this stuff?

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
2 posted 2006-03-31 07:59 AM


Loved this!  Seems we've both been thinking of threads - mine have been on the unraveled ones.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-03-31 08:54 AM


And "hope" is the magic word here Sy!
Looks like the start of a wonderfilled weekend.
May yours be a relaxing one.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2006-03-31 09:02 AM


A magic carpets mental twist


love this~~


M

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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The Netherlands
5 posted 2006-04-01 02:37 AM


I can't choose between the rope of hope and the magic carpet... smile... I'll have them both!!

Neeraja

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