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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2006-03-30 07:57 PM


I hope you don't mind the repost Donna, but my muse has gone misisng. I'm gonna put her over my knee when she gets back.  


she is sinuous
whole
she is effeminate
and again, in this morn
she is calm,
though a little disturbed

the wind mocks her

still

and she is like ...
a linen fabric, and her waves...
wrinkly
with tiny peaks
like the tips of snow-capped mountains

you can almost feel her
against your skin

soft and piquant

she is lustrous
and when her curves meet the shore
the threads of her, burn
themselves
into your irises
and there
she'll remain forever
as she brings you gifts

wrapped in sea-spray

fan shells
spiral shells

to then bribe you
for your
sea-urchin thoughts.

you are loved Bella
Maree

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-03-30 08:07 PM


what a beautiful tribute for a lovely lady
Enchantress
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2 posted 2006-03-30 08:14 PM


Indeed Maree...a beautiful tribute to our gentle one.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2006-03-30 08:48 PM


Our Gentle-Spirited would most assuredly not mind this repost! ~ 'Cause I sure as the dickens don't! That was truly lovely, Maree! ~ as are both you and Donna!


Linda

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4 posted 2006-03-30 08:49 PM


Yes, she is well loved, indeed!

I don't think she will mind a repost at all,
m'dear...

I think she will be very pleased...


Martie
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5 posted 2006-03-30 08:53 PM


Maree...Donna will love seeing this again...I sure did!!  
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6 posted 2006-03-30 11:16 PM


beautiful Maree......

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

bubblesleave
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7 posted 2006-03-30 11:18 PM


Enjoyed this write very much!

Bubbles

vlraynes
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8 posted 2006-03-31 01:44 AM



Beautiful, Maree...

and definitely worthy of a repost...

Hugs to you... and to Donna too...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

iliana
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9 posted 2006-03-31 01:48 AM


It's good to read you again, Maree....lovely, lovely tribute!
Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2006-03-31 08:12 AM


How can one mind something so beautiful Bella....

and again, in this morn
she is calm,  
though a little disturbed.....

   {pegged me perfectly)

Thank you, Bella......                                                                                                       

Dark Angel
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11 posted 2006-03-31 02:24 PM


How can one mind something so beautiful Bella....

that's right Bella, so you call on me anytime ok and i won't mind   ok

m xx

The Lady
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12 posted 2006-03-31 06:17 PM




"to then bribe you
for your
sea-urchin thoughts"

Beautiful.

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13 posted 2006-03-31 06:38 PM


*smiling*
oh my this is lovely
the writer, the subject, and the poem

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