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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2006-03-30 05:30 PM


I close my eyes
to see you. Heart
aching to know
you completely, to
see into you,
the glow that i
may have ignited within
you, excited just for you.
A force that is
not mine now.
Should i leave
love on the roadside?
Like a leaf golden,
but shrivelled and
dry, blowing in the wind?

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-03-30 07:31 PM


Never leave love by the roadside Phil.
Embrace it for all it's worth...
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2006-03-30 07:35 PM


Can I ditto Nancy's reply?
A lovely write, Phil.

WindWalker
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3 posted 2006-03-30 07:43 PM


This is a lovely write! And I love the imagery!!!!!!!!!!!
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-03-30 07:44 PM


never leave love anywhere
too hard to find it again


The Lady
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-03-30 10:48 PM



Splendid and the title called to me.
I agree with the others...
never leave love anywhere but
with someone who treasures it.


Suetang
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6 posted 2006-03-30 11:01 PM


So very heartfelt was this beautiful, yet sad write, Phil.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

iliana
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7 posted 2006-03-31 01:51 AM


Lovely writing, Phil.
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2007-03-02 04:44 PM


no you shouldn't leave it...
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