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HopeS
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0 posted 2006-03-29 01:31 AM



Forever I Will Remember

I would not have written
If it had not been for you
I began to feel confident
As my self esteem grew

You gave me inspiration
As I began to write more
You instilled something
Which I never had before

Having sensed the need
Somehow you could see
From the very first hello
It was as if you knew me

Warmth you transferred
By sharing loving insight
Forever I will remember
You inspiring me to write

Hope ©2006

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2006-03-29 01:47 AM


Those who inspire ~ help us to fly higher!


Linda


bubblesleave
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2 posted 2006-03-29 01:48 AM


Good metere and touching too Hope!

Hugs,
Bubbles

Kathy
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3 posted 2006-03-29 01:51 AM


Thanks for this one Hope.  


My Father was my inspiration,...and...we all have have a Father (of talent) somewhere...or...in sometime.

Very good!

Kathy

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4 posted 2006-03-29 01:53 AM


Very good write
Bernie

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Bernie Slicker

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5 posted 2006-03-29 02:05 AM


"Having sensed the need
Somehow you could see
From the very first hello
It was as if you knew me"


Hi Hope
This verse reminds me of the song....
"You Had Me From Hello" by Kenny Chesney....
one of mine and Gary's favorites.

Very good writing, as always.
Hugs,
Ethel

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Between the Lines
6 posted 2006-03-29 07:07 AM


nicely inspired~~

M

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