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Kathy
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0 posted 2006-03-29 12:28 PM



amid hanging gardens,
spoon tailed leeches
and wasps.

Maybe...

Maybe I don't belong.

Yet,

maybe the knob of midday, standing in it's own shadow,
savors the sun.

© Copyright 2006 Kathy Jenkins - All Rights Reserved
bubblesleave
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1 posted 2006-03-29 12:33 PM


Oh yea, you belong here!

Bubbles

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2006-03-29 12:44 PM


My goodness! Who would want to be amid leeches and wasps?!? Flirty

Howsabout a hug in the sun?!?
Sun 2
EA

Kathy
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3 posted 2006-03-29 12:49 PM


Sounds good to me...ummmmmm

YES

I'm willing!

Hugs,
Kathy

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2006-03-29 07:08 AM


I'm with Linda


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2006-03-29 07:15 AM



You belong anywhere
you find a song, Kathy.

Even wasps have theirs...

but just don't stand too close!




icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows
6 posted 2006-03-29 09:44 AM


Given my own life's trails, I always laugh at the fact that leeches creep me out!

Also, I enjoyed the poem.


scorpio
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right...there
7 posted 2006-03-29 11:50 AM


No question in my mind..you do belong here!!

believe in what your heart feels...

iliana
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8 posted 2006-03-29 12:48 PM


Kathy, even wasps fly in the garden.  Stay and smell the flowers!....jo
JL
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Texas, USA
9 posted 2006-03-30 12:05 PM


WASPS??!!

They can't make honey like your words do, so stick around!!



JL


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