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Coming Into Mist
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Coming Into Mist |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Coming Into Mist One pulse Again Again Overtaken Again Again And still I cannot see the shadows Flickering by the lamplight Confusion, as it passes on its way Damp, the flip of my collar Soundless, the azure meadow waits Outlines limb the sky before me Sentinel, erect and true I dream of starlight breakfast Dream the daybreak songs Broached by morning’s thick fingers Turn the night, her face in darkness Blushed the red of ambling spring Filling up my lungs in longing Undaunted, I step into daylight Seeing clearly my breath in the dew One Pulse Again Again Copyright Kkh 3/28/06 |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Lovely ThisDiamond, it's nice to feel so alive ain't it! A feeling that I am only begining to appreciate. Thank you! :-) |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“And still I cannot see the shadows Flickering by the lamplight Confusion, as it passes on its way Damp, the flip of my collar Soundless, the azure meadow waits” Pulsing and rhythmic read. It reminds me of The Tell Tale Heart, or something composed by Alfred Hitchcock. This is a great write. Enjoyed the read!! JL  |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I like the imagery in this well crafted poem! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beauty thanks for sharing |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Turn the night, her face in darkness Blushed the red of ambling spring Filling up my lungs in longing Undaunted, I step into daylight Seeing clearly my breath in the dew One Pulse Again Again Pure poetry, Kathleen!! You write such beautiful poems. Hugs, Ethel |
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