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Open Poetry #37

Days go. bye.

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2006-03-27 06:18 PM

I walk down the road again,
lost in thought... chained.

By my mind I speak with,
days go. Bye.

When I'm sitting here wonderin',
that everything went wrong again.

This my mind, wants freedom,
but it condemns.

By my mind I speak with,
days go. Bye.

It's the wind, I swear it again.
My own pain, i sewed it in.

This patchwork quilt is at it again.
Can I quit, getting caught in my own games..

Escape. Escape. Indeed.

By my mind, I speak with,
days go. Bye.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-03-27 09:11 PM

I understand this deeply Kellie

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Member Rara Avis

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2 posted 2006-03-27 11:19 PM

What an odd envelope you tuck this into--but it fits so well! I like the way you change the whole balance, with only a dot or two....

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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

3 posted 2006-03-28 12:00 PM

Hey thank you, I really can't wrap my head around this... but I want to .

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

4 posted 2006-03-28 12:26 PM

thanks for the read i enjoyed this a lot,
i can understand these feelings. thanks agian

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