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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-03-27 05:50 PM



A gray day
The flag hangs limply
On its pole

All the structures
Seem more square somehow
As if the whole world
Were old and had a cold

Ancients imagined this the afterward
To which all must finally come

An eternal pall
Absent sun or stars

The going on
Without a goal


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2006-03-27 07:21 PM


well put!
Ixtab
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since 1999-06-23
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MEXICAlpan de las tunas
2 posted 2006-03-27 08:52 PM


Very good
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