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For the moment, Still
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For the moment, Still |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ I wonder why you left where have you gone so faraway cast off behind the sun setting from warm sands and simple dreams. Time floats like a message in a bottle escaping beyond the windless sea and ripple of waves that break a heart without missing a single beat. There is a brand new dawn, disquised leaving faint images behind my eyes and all that's left to memory clear as the day dreams I have memorized. Like every diamond shimmers if only for the moment, still slow dancing on a summer breeze stringing seashells along the shore. Rolling back the tides I built a castle near a cove taking turns with each new moon that sways me in it's cradle. An endless kind of love that slipped away too soon serenades me in the dark near the surface of a tear. ~*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely write, Bluesy, but this - "An endless kind of love that slipped away too soon serenades me in the dark near the surface of a tear." simply stunning! And here go my own tears slipping into daylight! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Rolling back the tides I built a castle near a cove taking turns with each new moon that sways me in it's cradle. your words are always so refreshingly beautiful~~ Good to see them and you  M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Rolling back the tides I built a castle near a cove taking turns with each new moon that sways me in it's cradle. An endless kind of love that slipped away too soon serenades me in the dark near the surface of a tear." Beautiful Bluesy.... Love this piece...well done! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Such gentle sadness...there's a beautiful heart showing in this one, dear Lori...one that should not have to come to these things. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"An endless kind of love that slipped away too soon serenades me in the dark near the surface of a tear." Wow do I know this one! I have grown to be convinced that the tears never really stop, they just go into remission for bits of time. A great write my friend! Thank you for sharing it. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"near the surface of a tear" A masterful line! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
It is so nice to see you posting again... always simplistically beautiful. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
if only for the moment, still slow dancing on a summer breeze stringing seashells along the shore. Lori, this made such a beautiful picture in my mind. I love the beach and seashells. It's good to read your poetry, Sweetie. Hugs, Ethel |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
"An endless kind of love that slipped away too soon serenades me in the dark near the surface of a tear." beautiful Lori, even in its ache.....so good to see ya....hugssss you And so it those we live with |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Lori "An endless kind of love that slipped away too soon serenades me in the dark near the surface of a tear." I want to think that the endless kind of love, really really is endless. I believe it is...but sometimes yes, it is so sad that it cries. |
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