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soul drifter
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0 posted 2006-03-26 06:13 PM


March Snow

March snow falling
a murmur in my heart
calling to you
do you hear me now?
Can you get to me somehow?
The world's all green and white
and there's no love in sight
for me
oh can you hear me?

Cracked heart beating
for a social meeting
with you
reach out for your hand
reach out, any way I can
tell me the difference this morning
is it just the dew forming
or impending snow
please let me know

Green, white and grey today
make a promise to stay
through it all, hear my call
let's face the big and scary
"come what may"

March snow on the hills
reflecting in my mind
numb but for you
if you were here now
to warm my bones somehow
the girl of my brightest dreams,
get back to mending torn seams
inside me
only you can renew me

Blue and black my heart attack
I can't feel a thing for I lack
the emotional stimuli inside
let's face it, I'm in dire need
so please come back

March snow numbs the thrill
of discovering myself in spring
honey, please come through
ah, if you were here with me
to sort out my many miserys
the girl of my deepest thoughts,
smile your smile of 100 million watts
I'm pleading
the only one I'm needing

And there's a cloud in the sky
that says I love you, goodbye, baby
it was nice of you to try to catch a sunray for me
next time, put it in a box of musty pine
days like this, I'd let it ease my mind
so let the March snow fall
and let it all come true
just a hint of the shape of you
in my darkest dreaming
find the real meaning
of me in you
and only you can renew me



"I'm the soul drifter, and I'm out of this town, ain't no use hangin' round, you see" -- Lindsey Buckingham, 'Soul Drifter'

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-03-26 07:23 PM


that last verse really hit home for me
excellent penning!

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