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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Sometimes I wonder if it is a waste when concern may not matter except in your own mind. When first feelings become last thoughts and last thoughts become lost in solitude once again. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Those moments are made to fill a void - and they do it well. They are just as necessary as the ones that send us running on the threadmills of our minds I think. Great work M. Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
A nice element of thoughts brief - yet poetic in presentation a poet who cares |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just one of those mood swings... when "things" don't go as I wish or expect  thanks M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've felt that sense of uselessness, too... you write it so well!!! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“last thoughts become lost in solitude” Sometimes we place our self-expectations above the realm of reach, anyone’s reach. I don’t think lost in solitude is so bad. Self-reflection can be a humbling experience, but there is always a brighter day ahead. Enjoyed the read. JL  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understood... hugs |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, I completely understand this. It seems like you're looking in my head. LOL Hugs, Ethel |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I sure know that feeling. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sweetie... lately, nothing has gone as I expected, nor wanted. So I understand the swing of this very well. But here are to brighter days... We are in spring, y'know...  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Maureen...The need for concern is natural for our hearts to heal and survive. Enjoyed the read...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you all...for your kind responses  M |
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