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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2006-03-25 07:27 AM



A Holding Kiss

I awoke to the pleasant sound of you
breaking into my morning dreams.
Falling silent, to hear the soft tones
that always win me over,
the kind of medicine I need.

Some day I would like to dance,
feel that closeness, hearts in rhythm-slow,
Shed my cover, to lift the past
and let tomorrow's dreams
seize the day.

It's "Just Me" needing "Just You"
to seal the truth
with a kiss that holds...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2006 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-03-25 08:16 AM



Good morning Miss Maureen...




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2 posted 2006-03-25 08:39 AM


Lots of hugs for you
I hope that'll do

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2006-03-25 08:47 AM


Good Morning Miss Sunshine...we need some  sunshine warmth...

hugs
M

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2006-03-25 08:52 AM


Sure helps Bernie, thanks

M

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passing shadows
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6 posted 2006-03-25 03:35 PM


makes for a good day, yes
nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2006-03-26 10:16 AM


Yes, Dixie...always~~


M

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8 posted 2006-03-26 06:22 PM


That would be nice, wouldn't it?
JL
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9 posted 2006-03-27 03:31 PM


B E A U T I F U L!!

Very nice!!

JL

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10 posted 2006-03-27 04:48 PM


It's "Just Me" needing "Just You"
to seal the truth
with a kiss that holds...

---

beautiful Maureen

btw your smile is beautiful as well...

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2006-03-28 06:50 AM


Sue, yes , thanks..hope you are doing well.


JL, thank you for your words

Lauren, nice to see you here thank you... Yes, that smile is  my best asset so I am told.

"we can love completely
without complete understanding"
~~ isn' that the truth

M
  

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12 posted 2006-03-28 11:21 PM


your morning sounds better than mine..
nakdthoughts
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13 posted 2006-03-29 07:12 AM


awww Reb..I am sorry... sometimes I am surprised...it's those little things I love

I could always call you in the morning,if it would  cheer you up


M

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14 posted 2006-03-29 09:51 AM


Thanks for the smile!


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15 posted 2006-03-29 10:31 AM


Little Mo darling one, this is as soft as the morning dew and as beautiful, I love it utterly. I know exactly how you feel, that slow opening of your eyes, a dawning kiss to wake you from your dreaming slumber.
Beautiful writing darling one just beautiful
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
x x x

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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