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tatalinia
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0 posted 2006-03-25 03:27 AM


resting in the arms of this life
lying in a bestowed world of lust
i lie naked waiting for my death
in waste of garbage called life
giving into my feelings these emotions
that burn deep inside me
so young they say to lead a life
of the nothings of the empty tomrrows
but love of this world
this land so big so much to see
how can i sit behind a four coarse door
four empty walls of white
when happiness knocks on my heart
everyday in closed rooms
making money that goes no where
when you die does it come along?



I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2006-03-25 09:02 AM


a poem to make me think this morning...

sad thoughts...from such a beautiful young woman.

Nice to meet you and your words~~

M

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Canada eh.
2 posted 2006-03-25 09:14 AM


Such sad thoughts to ponder here...
An excellent write.
Welcome to Passions tatalinia!
I know you will enjoy it here.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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3 posted 2006-03-25 12:52 PM


A very poignant write indeed, and I would suggest they start opening those doors and seeing what's out there!   Welcome to Passions, sorry I missed your entrance poem but enjoyed this one.

Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem

tatalinia
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4 posted 2006-03-25 05:04 PM


thanks for the replys i appreciate your opinions an compliments.

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

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