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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2006-03-24 04:07 PM

Beneath the waves of desire
stands the will of a demon’s dreams
disguised and perceived as rhythmic release
of a woman’s intrinsic feel.

So tosses the sea in this artful ordeal
that takes to the peak the fullness of needs
then crashes them down into emptiness
as a means of entrenching reality.

And this is exhausting, you know,
for the sea and the maybe you/me
played out/reeled in like a fisherman’s line
from the hands of demonic dreams.

Whether demon or king or angel within
this mysterious brand of soul energy
no conformist to stick to the rules
of humankind’s imaginative needs.

Rounded and grounded, oh, mighty sea/me,
yet still in the darkness of silent repose
the dream makers and breakers give voice
to the soul’s individual prose …
and I know all the words by heart
for I am that demon in part!

Helen

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2006-03-24 05:14 PM

Your angel/demon sea soul knows prose!

Love & Soul Light,
Linda

emeralddreamer
Junior Member

since 2006-03-24

Posts 27
PA, United States

2 posted 2006-03-24 11:07 PM

Wonderfully composed!

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

3 posted 2006-03-25 12:27 PM

So tosses the sea in this artful ordeal
that takes to the peak the fullness of needs
then crashes them down into emptiness
as a means of entrenching reality.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2006-03-25 02:17 AM

Linda - Loved your comment! Thanks!

Emeralddreamer and exhale - thank you so much for reading - much appreciated.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2006-03-25 06:45 PM

Loved this!

~Alli~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2006-03-25 07:06 PM

Someone once told me once of our worst enemy can be our own "passion." You hit the nail on the head here, Helen...I do think passion has its place but it has to answer to the angel in us.

.....jo

[This message has been edited by iliana (03-26-2006 11:38 AM).]

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2006-03-26 12:36 PM

Thanks, Alli - glad you enjoyed.

Jo - you're so right! Life is perhaps just a balancing trick and then along comes passion and ... everything goes up in smoke!

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

8 posted 2006-03-26 11:36 AM

This is Wonderful! Well crafted too!!!!!

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