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The Silver Maid
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The Silver Maid |
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terasinas Member
since 2006-03-24
Posts 91Michigan ... The Great Lakes |
The Silver Maid Silver rings upon each hand, a missing wedding band Upon her head, silver strands In a long gown, once white, now silver drab, adorned with woven silver lace … She looked above to silver sky, with silver tears upon her face, uttered a beseeching cry, “Why”? she asked, “Why”! No one heard No one answered her … And when she died, all that remained of the Silver Maid was silver rain, falling … from a silver sky in a sad, haunting silver lullaby. Teresa L. Schulz 11/10/2004 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Very good. Creates a legend . . . and a ghost story John |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
I love this one to tera. Very sad. Haunting. I agree with John Creates a legend. A ghost story. Excellent ! |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Yes, this is very sad and haunting. Well written too!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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