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curiouse
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0 posted 2006-03-24 11:28 AM


Why?
Why are you leaving me out?
Is this your message to me,
saying that you don’t want for me
to be in your life anymore?
You know what you’re doing;
it is not like you’re oblivious
to everything that is going on
Why do you keep looking over at me and then looking away, you know how I’m feeling,
do you not care, have you gotten bored of me
Why, when I talk about my insecurities do you turn away and ignore
Why do you not acknowledge my presence?
I know that I am not exaggerating because
I know how lovingly you used to treat me
Before it’s not like that any more.
Or am I taking things too much to heart maybe I am over exaggerating,
I hope so.

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Goldenrose
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1 posted 2006-03-24 12:45 PM


Lots of questions...few asnwers..answer them one at a time...


Goldenrose

curiouse
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2 posted 2006-03-24 01:12 PM


thankyou for replying goldenrose,
curiouse

Cloud 9
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3 posted 2006-03-24 01:59 PM


LOVE it
curiouse
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4 posted 2006-03-24 02:20 PM


thankyou cloud9

angiecharlene
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5 posted 2006-03-25 04:51 PM


Great poem
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2006-03-25 07:01 PM


Nice writing...James
curiouse
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7 posted 2006-03-26 06:36 AM


thankyou guys
curiouse

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