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Little Calumet

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Huan Yi
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Waukegan


0 posted 03-24-2006 11:03 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


A river flows
Slowly deeply
Under an iron bridge

The muddy colored water
Swirls in circles
Among green lily pads
Under the shadows
Of summer leaves

On the slope of a hill near the shore
A wooden house in disrepair
Its siding gray with age

Once upon a time
Many years ago
There was a beautiful girl

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terasinas
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since 03-24-2006
Posts 91
Michigan ... The Great Lakes


1 posted 03-24-2006 11:16 AM       View Profile for terasinas   Email terasinas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit terasinas's Home Page   View IP for terasinas

Awww Huan .. I loved this ... I grew up in Northern Mich and lived in a town called Calumet. Before that, it was Copper City, not far away ... and it was there I used to visit a pond very much like the one you described .. ty for the memories .. nice ones .. beautiful writing .. please keep sharing. I appreciate your writing very much. Thank you

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simply beautiful.
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