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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-03-24 08:50 AM


Tangible Speech

This caress beseeched from the hallows of my heart
Uncharted, and inadequate in it’s tenderness
But given freely, without regret or expectation
These lips whisper their awe against your face
Trembling with emotion still wet with dew
Softly tantalizing nerves across your neck
Sweet, the scent paused in barely brushed velvet
Exploding stamen to seed, finest gold pollen to the tongue
Saying your name, over and over in vibrant song

These words move slowly as they explore your dreams
Travel the depths of your soul in unfettered glee
Leaving shimmered heat signature along your shoulders
How much of my universe you hold within your arms
Stars are made in twilight vigil upon the waves of your mind
Rising against the satin flanks of an eternal grace
Moving in the sounds of your sighs, the echo takes me
Kneading away your pain, sifting your need through my own
Sensing the strength of your willowed boughs, firmly rooted

All that divides us falls away, without effort or thought
Until we are pure light, beacons of energy and throb
We speak without word, in clear voice and warm rush
Excited and calm blended in the waters of timeless knowing
My kisses probe the deeper caves of your relentless songs
Whispering the healing touches of entwined blessings
Rising to the skin in molten pulse, release that begs to be heard
That we would know each other in the vastness of dark seas
Fingers talk of feelings long hidden in the tender grass
Eager to bloom, as I reach to gather vine and flower
Giving back to you the racing flow of an everlasting kiss

Copyright Kkh 3/24/06

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-03-24 09:23 AM


Whoa...Lady, you've got it bad...and it's refreshing as a warm summer breeze to read you...love is the most powerful of seasons...and you have captured the strength, courage, vulnerability, power, tears, of it all...

thank you

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2006-03-24 09:27 AM


Love's in bloom ~ and the sap is risin'!
Great poem, TD! Love is in the air!

Happy spring!
Linda
Flowers

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2006-03-24 11:27 AM


What a sensational write.  
I think you have eloquently portrayed your vision
of what being in love is, or should be.
(I say as I cool down, and wipe the sweat from my brow….)

Great write!!  Very nice.

JL



Goldenrose
Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

4 posted 2006-03-24 01:03 PM


This was just a fountain of flowing love, meandering through the wells and gulleys of the heart..loved it TD..thank you..

Goldenrose.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2006-03-24 02:43 PM


I wish my mind could think the way that your poetic mind does! This is awesome poetry!
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
6 posted 2006-03-26 04:14 AM


Oh, TD, this is WOW!  Simply WOW!
StevenS
Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)
7 posted 2006-03-26 08:31 AM


Soooo Fine! Breath taking!
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
8 posted 2006-03-26 09:58 AM


yes, as Steven says...breathtaking

M

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
9 posted 2006-03-26 10:36 AM


"All that divides us falls away, without effort or thought
Until we are pure light, beacons of energy and throb"

What a freedom Love is!  And to refect  it's essence in one another...what a gift!  You leave me speechless with your tangible speech.   (Sigh)  Extraordinary images in this write.  

~ Karen    

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