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In and Out of Dreams of You
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In and Out of Dreams of You |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
In and Out of Dreams of You Layers of thought mixed with extrasensory visions of dreaming dreams of you, hesitation, and complications swirling between a touch, a scent, or a consideration of you… In my dreaming I see you taking hold of me and you insisting, that we are meant to be as one lost in you and me… My thoughts tangent to reality, yet in the fog of this dream, my want is to entreat that day once more, of being with you, yet my eyes open and I fade into today. The night with you now gone, love moves back into the land of dreams, that place for another time, another night, when I am in and out of dreams of you. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"yet my eyes open and I fade into today" very much enjoyed this  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your dreams reflect the reality of not only your loving past, but of your loving tomorrows. You expressed the depth of your longing and feelings exceptionally well. Giving you a big, understanding hug, EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-23-2006 08:09 PM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
 sorry, but this beauty deserves a kiss JL, my friend, this was georgous felt the yearning and desire to love and be loved... tremendous write, sir |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sounds like you need to keep your eyes closed just a wee bit longer...just to know. Well done...enjoyed very much! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"in and out of dreams of you" - yes, I can understand this and then when we manage to get ourselves out permanently there's always a slight longing for the in part again. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
I know this longing that you speak of...you said it so eloquently-full of so much emotion that I am floored... And yet I know exactly what you are saying here... Beautiful write! Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"The night with you now gone, love moves back into the land of dreams, that place for another time, another night, when I am in and out of dreams of you." Oh so romantic...very beautiful. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
JL, this is filled with love....I love those kind of dreams.  .....jo |
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cody 2 Junior Member
since 2006-03-12
Posts 48london |
you create a beautiful picture |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Beautiful, JL!!! In and out of dreams...love it! misc'e |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
yet my eyes open and I fade into today... hate when that happens  enjoyable write... M |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
JL...I thought I had replied to this write yesterday... It was my inspiration for tangible speech. Thank you for sharing your dreams. TD |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thanks all for your kind words. Way too kind. Lee J!! I’ll be a'collecting on that kiss, lassie! TD: Thank you so much. Your words warm my heart, and had me smiling like a Cheshire cat! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Agreed with everyone, beautiful write! |
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