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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2006-03-23 06:24 AM



"To share your pain
or soothe a fevered brow
if only the distance would allow"

Moving slowly myself.
Routine, the highlight of my day.
Springing forth with somewhere moments
timed unknown,
dressed in a touch of your mind.

Your blue tinted world becomes me,
as I walk in shadows that follow
wishing for a better tomorrow...
for you, for me.
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-03-23 08:40 AM


for us all, this touched me deeply, how beautifully articulated...and written in a way, that is understanding...allowing..tremendous articulation..
Enchantress
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2 posted 2006-03-23 08:47 AM


"Your blue tinted world becomes me,
as I walk in shadows that follow
wishing for a better tomorrow...
for you, for me."

A wonderful write Maureen.
Much enjoyed your thoughts.

Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-03-23 09:01 AM


Here's to better tomorrows for all of us!
I love this Maureen

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JL
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4 posted 2006-03-23 09:25 AM


Beautiful heartfelt words.
But, I guess that’s just the way you are.
Wouldn’t expect any less.

JL



Earth Angel
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5 posted 2006-03-23 10:47 AM


"Routine, the highlight of my day."

~ May all your tomorrows be better ones!

You bring your readers into your world. I always feel your writes.


Ea

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2006-03-24 06:44 AM


LeeJ, thank you so much...I enjoy reading your deepest thoughts

M

Nancy, The flu seems to have reached more than myself....here's hoping today is a better day. (love your signature)

Interloper, thank you "I"...I am  almost over this thing (have to work anyway now and breathe in all those coughing germs in the schools)

JL, thank you for your "sweet" response

Linda, I am glad you can feel my words, sometimes I am told I open up too much.
hope you are doing well
M



Local Rebel
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7 posted 2006-03-24 09:30 PM


Feel better soon Reene... I've been nursing my youngest through it too... sending her back to give it back..!

I like that dress -- quite a designer

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2006-03-25 08:55 AM


Reb...this thing sure holds on...hope your daughter is feeling better...

thanks for the compliment

M

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9 posted 2006-03-25 06:39 PM


Enjoyed reading this.

~Alli~

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10 posted 2006-03-25 07:58 PM


Hi Maureen,
I know I've told you before, but you write
some of the best poetry. Whatever your topic is,
it always touches my heart.

I hope you're feeling better now from the flu.
My lungs have been giving me more trouble lately.
Hugs,
Ethel

Professor Gloom
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of Depression
11 posted 2006-03-25 11:19 PM


At times a touch seems so little
At times a touch seems so much
Enjoyed

Gloom

playing.with.crayons
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12 posted 2006-03-27 01:49 AM


"wishing for a better tomorrow...
for you, for me."

Oh dear this is beautiful. Made me all tear up. Then again. I did just have a maths class.
hugs and xx's

farewell the ash-tray girl

nakdthoughts
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13 posted 2006-03-27 06:34 AM


Thank you ~Alli~

Ethel, I am glad that what I write has some meaning for you. I actually lead a very plain life besides my "situation" so I can only write what I know. I appreciate your responses...and I hope you are feeling better today. The flu has flown for me...
although I am still a bit tired.

PG..I agree. Thanks for taking the time to stop by.

playing.with.crayons Hmmmm..Math makes you cry it's one of my favorite subjects...
thank you

M

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