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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2006-03-22 11:11 AM



Before
The day begins

With its warm light
Bright colors
Red
And blue

The drop of dew
In slender trail

Flowing down
A silent hour

Of white stone



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curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england
1 posted 2006-03-22 12:43 PM


i don't really get this poem but i am prepared to interperat it in a way that i am certain you did not mean but that i understand
love,me

El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
Posts 761
Ohio, USA
2 posted 2006-03-22 05:31 PM


The remembrance is sad, but the dawn always brings hope...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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