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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
today i sit in sighs waiting for one that once was. waiting for that lost soul to be found. I sit here and i wonder if rainbows are magic or just a part of science. I look out at the world. i see the children playing, i see the lovers loving and i see happiness, i see love and i see life, but then i look deeper, the world begins to sadden and now i look straight in to every soul i can see, i can feel pain and heartache i can now see life in it's true colours, i have awoken and i am more curiouse of our purpose in this world than ever. [This message has been edited by curiouse (03-22-2006 12:28 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Curiosity in a poet is a good thing. Keep looking and writing! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The saying "curiosity killed the cat" may be true for felines ~ however, it makes for a fine poet in humans!  We live in a Dark/Light world filled with yin/yangs! Please excuse my obtuse sense of humour! Keep thinkin', ponderin' ~ and a writin'! Love & Light EA  |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
thankyou both for your time and words i'm totally inspired by you and this site. i'm glad i joined.i now have a place to share my emotions and feeling with people. it's a true gift. thankyou. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very nicely done curiouse. I think that all poets have in common the desire to be curious, to ask questions we sometimes never find answers to. Much enjoyed this post. |
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cody 2 Junior Member
since 2006-03-12
Posts 48london |
if we only look at the surface we only see what others want us to see,nice write |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
There are lots of questions...that is the wonder of the world..enjoyed the read.. Goldenrose. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
For one reason or other, I just keep going back to this line. Love it! I sit here and i wonder if rainbows are magic or just a part of science. I like the questions this brings. |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Your sensitivity is wonderful - keep looking past the surface and you will be rewarded with some great insights! Enjoyed your poetic musings tonight.  The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
thankyou all for your comments there have brung light in to my day |
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