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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-03-22 07:41 AM



am here to be your book again
if you wish to pen
into me of your life size

and dangle me with your dreams
spend your sin and soul
at my vending machine

if but for a moment
between the dawn and dawning
of what was tomorrow

when we put yesterday there
into the pickup truck dust
where our roads were dirt

but there were lover trees
in the distance
and we just took our time

getting to the parking lot


____________
daark

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-03-22 08:07 AM


and dangle me with your dreams
spend your sin and soul
at my vending machine


hmmmm, vending machine...tandy cakes...I'm dreaming of a tasty cake tandy cake, with a big glass of milk...

sorry, vending machine...sparked that?  wull I can't help it?

Anyway

but there were lover trees
in the distance
and we just took our time

getting to the parking lot

very very nice....lovely words this morning D.

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-03-22 08:09 AM


ms LeeJ..long as you "got milk"? guess you can play..thanks lady babe, I love how your mind takes and makes the bunny trails
Sunshine
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3 posted 2006-03-22 08:28 AM



Snagged me from the first line...
I love gathering books,
imagining some beautiful penmanship
to flow across them...

too often I leave them blank
as I watch people
crossing parking lots...



beautiful noise, this...


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-03-22 08:49 AM


ms sun, you are the sun
with your touch, thanks lady friend

rwood
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5 posted 2006-03-22 10:30 AM


You always had a way....

with wordsmiles.


miles and miles of them.


me

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-03-22 10:37 AM


ms wood, it is a pleasure to see you with dust on your red shoes, thanks lady
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
7 posted 2006-03-22 03:03 PM


you whisper words that all women somehow hear

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2006-03-22 07:02 PM


ms slick
it pleases me to have your ear
when my whisper speaks
thanks so much lady friend

Air Goddess
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9 posted 2006-03-23 08:57 PM


See...I am here again reading and finding
more hidden gems in your poetry.

Klassy Lassy
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10 posted 2006-03-24 06:48 PM


To be my book?  I've been reading a daark scrawl on the pages... makes me think of the old time dance books (sort of).  Long ago my feet visited dusty country roads many times, in those "lazy, hazy, crazy days of summer," the trees flirting in green lace and soft whispers.  


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11 posted 2006-03-26 08:29 PM


`always interesting

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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