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the grey
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Queensland, Australia.

0 posted 2006-03-22 01:41 AM




FLOWERS ON A FRIDAY

It was bucking bulls and cowboy busting broncos
And the challenge that accompanied each ride
That consumed the heart and mind of my young cowboy
And this fact my Buddy never tried to hide.
I recall the time we met in Kelly’s diner
He was busted up and feeling rather sore
But the cheque that paid the tab that I presented
Seemed to him to somehow even up the score.

He had eaten there that week and got acquainted,
And I somehow got to know this cowboy’s mind
while the flowers that he gave me on that Friday
Surely showed beside his toughness, he was kind.
We were married in the summer six months later,
On a Friday I recall so very well,
Because Fridays he would always buy me flowers
And then go and ride those bulls and broncs from hell.

Chorus
Buddy always bought me flowers on a Friday
As he knew I feared the rides that lay ahead
But my man his heart and soul was in his riding
And I loved this cowboy that I planned to wed.
Yes he always bought me flowers on a Friday
And I loved this cowboy that I planned to wed.

All our friends had shared that special evening with us
And we raged and partied well into the night,
Then we slipped away to share the morning hours,
Til the dawn rose and revealed its splendid light.
We both showered and had breakfast at the roadhouse
Laughed and shared the joy that comes with wedded bliss,
But I sensed a certain tiredness in my Buddy
And I prayed he’d give the ride that day a miss.

Buddy drew the brindle bombshell riders hated
And that beast exploded when it left the chute,
Twisting left then right and suddenly it stumbled
And my Buddy he was crushed by that great brute.
When it came to say goodbye to my sweet lover
There was one thing that I vowed I’d always do
I would always bring him flowers on a Friday
And I’d tell his child about his father too.
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Chorus
Bud I’ll always bring you flowers on a Friday
That’s the one thing that I vow I’ll always do.
Cause you always brought me flowers on a Friday
And your child will always bring you flowers too.
Yes I’ll always bring you flowers on a Friday
And your child will always bring you flowers too.

©Bush Poet and Balladeer
Merv Webster

© Copyright 2006 the grey - All Rights Reserved
Rainbowdust
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1 posted 2006-03-22 04:50 AM


So tenderly told, brought tears to my eyes, Grey. Thank you for for such a touching write.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

the grey
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2 posted 2006-03-22 06:55 AM


G'day Rainbowdust.  I was fortunate enough this year at the Tamworth Country Music Festival to get three out of the five nominations in the Lyrics Only Section of the TSA [Tamworth Song Writers Association]National Song Writing Competition and then to take it out.

Flowers on a Friday was one of the three nominations.

Thanks for sharing it and thinking of those  who've lost loved ones in a sport they dedicate their lives too.

The Grey

Enchantress
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3 posted 2006-03-22 09:08 AM


A most excellent write!!!
What a fantastic storyteller you are!
Well done Sir..well done!

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2006-03-22 09:21 AM


You most assuredly are a first-rate balladeer! Congrats on the recognition that your lyrics received in that competition! ~ and well-deserved, I might add!

You are a marvellous story-teller! ~ A totally captivating ~ and exceptionally moving! ~ read!

Love & Light,
EA

the grey
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5 posted 2006-03-22 04:19 PM


G'day Enchantress.  I guess there are so many folk who attend rodeos,looking to be entertained, though sadly, from time to time, accdents happen and it's the mums and dad's and sweethearts that are left with the memories.  Thanks for sharing these lyrics.

The Grey

the grey
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6 posted 2006-03-22 04:22 PM


G'day Earth Angel.  Thank you for your kind words and preserving the stories of our country's culture  is something I feel privileged to to do.

The Grey

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