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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813
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Circling above my words acquire layer after layer; their heaviness hangs heavy. So long has it been I have not been gifted that I wait with apprehension for them to come down. Not usually one to be short of patience the waiting is not something to mind but at times I do wonder is it me or You that is waiting? Am I awry; have I reversed my steps and You are waiting for me to turn around? My heart is tuned to Yours every minute of every day but this lack of words has turned my prayers to less than whispers. Words are not the lot of Love for I would rather feel You quietly wrapping around than to put my fingers on the printing. But is it reciprocal? Can You feel me waiting; can you feel my spirit wordlessly wing my love to You? Lord if I am backwards please turn me and if I am not, then please know that with or without words I love You. [This message has been edited by luminosity (03-21-2006 03:55 PM).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
excellent... I am putting this one in my library  |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
SEA...*smiling* a library'd prayer, is one worth writing, thank you my friend you make me glad to write |
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the grey Member
since 2006-01-06
Posts 119Queensland, Australia. |
G'day luminosity. I am often reminded by my dear wife that I need to tell her how much I love her as she cannot read my mind and she loves to hear the words. I'm glad though our Creator can read our inner most thoughts, though I guess he likes us to whisper aloud at times as well. Enjoyed your reflections. The Grey |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Luminosity - this is some good writing, and I know what you mean. I especially liked: "Words are not the lot of Love for I would rather feel You quietly wrapping around than to put my fingers on the printing." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How many times I have come back and read again this thread. Beautiful write. TD |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Little one... I needed this poem today, as well. Bless your heart.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Both your words and your heart are full of Light, Dear Luminous One!  Lovely, lovely, lovely!!! EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very very beautiful. I too needed to read this today. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
Thank you all so much, that my lack of words would be graced with such thoughtful responses is counted as a blessing to me thank you again |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
but this lack of words has turned my prayers to less than whispers. He hears, lady... He hears even the blood running through your veins... so He definitely hears your love. *S* Beautiful write!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
"My heart is tuned to Yours every minute of every day but this lack of words has turned my prayers to less than whispers" This got me majorily! Every line of this poem was absolute beauty! Thank you for sharing such lovely sentiments from your heart. Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
suthern, thank you so much lady...I just worry to be found lacking in the end... amy, thank you.... |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I'd recognize that writing anywhere -- even if I didn't know...  |
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